Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-applicability-13.txt

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Wed, 07 August 2019 18:28 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-applicability-13.txt
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Francis, thanks for your review. I entered an Abstain ballot.

Alissa


> On Jul 10, 2019, at 4:02 PM, Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr> wrote:
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-i2nsf-applicability-13.txt 
> Reviewer: Francis Dupont
> Review Date: 20190704
> IETF LC End Date: 20190708
> IESG Telechat date: unknown
> 
> Summary: Ready
> 
> Major issues: None
> 
> Minor issues: None
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> - spelling: 1 page 2, 2 page 4, 5 page 9: fulfil -> fulfill
> 
> Regards
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> Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr
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