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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-eai-rfc5721bis-07,

Glen Zorn <glenzorn@gmail.com> Fri, 21 September 2012 15:52 UTC

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On 09/21/2012 10:44 PM, Pete Resnick wrote:
> On 9/21/12 10:23 AM, Pete Resnick wrote:
>>> -- The abstract should mention that this obsoletes 5721

Why?  There is a statement in the header, 10 lines above the abstract, 
that says "Obsoletes: 5721 (if approved)".

>>
>> It does.
>
> Sorry. You said abstract, not intro. Got it.
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> pr
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