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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc4960-errata-06

Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> Thu, 07 June 2018 06:40 UTC

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From: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>
To: Michael Tuexen <tuexen@fh-muenster.de>
CC: Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu>, "draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc4960-errata.all@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc4960-errata.all@ietf.org>, General Area Review Team <gen-art@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc4960-errata-06
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Hi Michael,

Please see inline.

>> On 4. Jun 2018, at 05:17, Christer Holmberg
>><christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> wrote:
>> 
>> 
>> Re-sent due to wrong e-mail address.
>> 
>>> 
>>> Hi,
>>> 
>>> I have also looked at this document, and there are things that I have
>>> think are unclear:
>>> 
>>> Q1: It is Informational, and it does not update RFC 4960. Instead, it
>>>just
>>> seems to list the erratas (but without even referencing them, as noted
>>>by
>>> Paul). I think that it should be made very clear that this document is
>>> only for guidance, and that implementers shall use the actual erratas
>>>for
>>> the actual updates.
>Please note that the documents covers the following processed erratas and
>also mentions this:
>
>* 
>https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc4960-errata-06#section-3.1
>  covers Errata ID 1440.
>* 
>https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc4960-errata-06#section-3.2
>  covers Errata ID 1574.
>* 
>https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc4960-errata-06#section-3.3
>  covers Errata ID 2592.
>* 
>https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc4960-errata-06#section-3.4
>  covers Errata ID 3291 and Errata ID 3804.
>* 
>https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc4960-errata-06#section-3.5
>  covers Errata ID 3423.
>* 
>https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc4960-errata-06#section-3.6
>  covers Errata ID 3788.
>* 
>https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc4960-errata-06#section-3.7
>  covers Errata ID 4071.
>* 
>https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc4960-errata-06#section-3.8
>  covers Errata ID 4400.
>* 
>https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc4960-errata-06#section-3.9
>  covers Errata ID 5003.

I did not find a reference to Errata ID 5003 for the changes to section
10.1. But, you are right that the other erratas are mentioned. I should
have double checked that.

Regards,

Christer

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