Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-tsn-05

Ines, thanks for your review. Balázs, thanks for your responses. I entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa

> On Feb 11, 2021, at 6:24 AM, Ines Robles <mariainesrobles=40googlemail.com@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> Hi Balázs,
> 
> Thank you for your clarifications. It is Ok for me. 
> 
> BR, 
> Ines
> 
> On Mon, Feb 8, 2021 at 10:46 PM Balázs Varga A <balazs.a.varga@ericsson.com <mailto:balazs.a.varga@ericsson.com>> wrote:
> Hi Ines,
> Many thanks for your review. 
> See my reactions and proposed updates below.
> Thanks
> Bala'zs
> 
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> From: Ines Robles via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org <mailto:noreply@ietf.org>> 
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> Subject: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-tsn-05
> 
> Reviewer: Ines Robles
> Review result: Ready with Nits
> 
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> Document: draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-tsn-05
> Reviewer: Ines Robles
> Review Date: 2021-02-05
> IETF LC End Date: 2021-02-05
> IESG Telechat date: 2021-02-18
> 
> Summary:
> 
> This document specifies the Deterministic Networking MPLS data plane when operating over a TSN sub-network.
> 
> I have some minor questions to the authors.
> 
> Major issues: None
> 
> Minor issues: None
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> 
> - Page 5: Could you please describe what the "TSN treatment" comprise?
> 
> <Bala'zs> TSN treatment means to execute TSN functionalities during forwarding. I will extend the text
> OLD TEXT:
>        ... All these functions have to identify flows those 
>        require TSN treatment.
> NEW TEXT:
>        ... All these functions have to identify flows those 
>        require TSN treatment (i.e., applying TSN functions
>        during forwarding).
> END
> 
> - Are the security considerations the same for TSN-unaware that are for TSN-aware nodes? - How are the privacy considerations for those? It would be nice to mention explicitly how or where (I-D.ietf-detnet-security???) the privacy considerations are addressed for TSN-unaware and TSN-aware nodes
> 
> <Bala'zs> The I-D.ietf-detnet-security contains DetNet specific security considerations. TSN-unaware nodes are out-of-scope in the draft. TSN-aware nodes are part of both the MPLS and the TSN domain, where both domain has its own security considerations, which must be applied. 
> 
> Thank you for this document
> 
> Ines.
> 
> 
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