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Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com> Tue, 27 August 2024 20:39 UTC

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Hi Paul,
thank you for your thorough review and helpful suggestion. I agree with you
and removed the sentence altogether. I uploaded the new version -11
<https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-nvo3-geneve-oam/>.

Regards,
Greg

On Tue, Aug 27, 2024 at 9:52 AM Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu> wrote:

> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft.
> For more information, please see the FAQ at
>
> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
>
> Document: draft-ietf-nvo3-geneve-oam-10
> Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
> Review Date: 2024-08-27
> IETF LC End Date: TBD
> IESG Telechat date: TBD
>
> Summary:
>
> This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should
> be fixed before publication.
>
> NIT:
>
> Section 1.1.1 includes the following statement:
>
> "The term "BIER OAM" used in this document interchangeably with longer
> version "set of OAM protocols, methods, and tools for BIER layer"."
>
> But BIER is not used anywhere else in the document. Hence I think you
> can remove this. If you choose to retain it, then it needs to be defined.
>
> Otherwise this document seems ready to go.
>
>

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