[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang-09

Linda Dunbar <Linda.dunbar@huawei.com> Tue, 04 September 2018 22:29 UTC

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Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review result: Almost Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang-??
Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review Date: 2018-09-04
IETF LC End Date: 2018-09-07
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:
This document specify the YANG data model for IEEE1588-2008.
The document is written very clear. I have some questions, such as
What is the relationship between Current-DS and Default-DS?
It seems to be that the "default-ds" has most of the information for the clock.
Is Current-ds simply supplement?

Major issues:

Minor issues:

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