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Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-sidrops-8210bis-06

Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org> Thu, 16 June 2022 12:05 UTC

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From: Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org>
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Date: Thu, 16 Jun 2022 15:04:54 +0300
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Stewart, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document.

Lars


> On 2022-4-28, at 20:20, Stewart Bryant via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
> Review result: Ready with Issues
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
> 
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> Document: draft-ietf-sidrops-8210bis-06
> Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
> Review Date: 2022-04-28
> IETF LC End Date: 2022-04-29
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary: I read this from a GenArt perspective rather than a routing
> perspective, and from that viewpoint the only issues that need addressing are
> the matter of the obsolete RFCs that are called up without reference to their
> status and any necessary mitigations. Once this matter is addressed the draft
> is ready for publication.
> 
> Major issues: None
> 
> Minor issues:
> ======
> Nits fulls up three errors:
> 
>  ** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 2385 (Obsoleted by RFC 5925)
>  ** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 5246 (Obsoleted by RFC 8446)
>  ** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 8208 (Obsoleted by RFC 8608)
> 
> The first is covered by an explanation in the text of the draft, but the other
> two are not.
> 
> I am not sure what the right what the technology and deployment issues are in
> moving the the newer RFCs, but there is not text as far as I can see noting the
> obsolete nature of RFC5246 or RFC8208, nor any comment on their replacement by
> RFC8446 and RFC8608 respectively.
> ======
> 
> Nits/editorial comments: None
> 
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