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Re: [Gen-art] [Lsr] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-lsr-ip-flexalgo-11 [REVISED]

Peter Psenak <ppsenak@cisco.com> Mon, 15 May 2023 11:32 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [Lsr] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-lsr-ip-flexalgo-11 [REVISED]
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Hi Paul,

thanks for your comments, I fixed both of them.
Changes will be part of the next version.

thanks,
Peter

On 12/05/2023 16:21, Paul Kyzivat wrote:
> [Resending with the the wg email address corrected]
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
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> For more information, please see the FAQ at
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> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
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> Document: draft-ietf-lsr-ip-flexalgo-11
> Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
> Review Date: 2023-05-12
> IETF LC End Date: 2023-05-16
> IESG Telechat date: ?
> 
> Summary:
> 
> This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should
> be fixed before publication.
> 
> NITS: 2
> 
> 1) NIT: typo
> 
> In section 5: s/datapalne/data-plane/
> 
> 2) NIT: reported by IDNits
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> In section 6.1:
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>    == Missing Reference: 'RFC5120' is mentioned on line 301, but not defined
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