[Gen-art] Gen-art: Telechat review of draft-ietf-netext-radius-pmip6-06

Elwyn Davies <elwynd@dial.pipex.com> Thu, 09 February 2012 11:49 UTC

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Document: draft-ietf-netext-radius-pmip6-08
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review Date: 9 February 2012
IETF LC End Date: 19 January 2012
IESG Telechat date: 19 January 2012-

Summary: Ready.  
For the record the various issues identified at last call have been fixed - thanks.

Major issues: 

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
s4.1, last para: s/contradicting combination/contradictory combinations/ (2 places).