Re: [Gen-art] [CCAMP] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-ccamp-flexi-grid-fwk-05 - Nits/editorial items

[Ramon Casellas <[e-mail]>]

Adrian, all

Thanks, pleasee see inline

El 05/08/2015 a las 15:02, Adrian Farrel escribió:
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> Right, thanks Fatai. You have put us right.
>
> But David and I both got confused by Figure 3, and perhaps by the 
> difference between n and m.
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> I suggest
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> OLD
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> Slot width = 25 GHzSlot width = 37.5 GHz
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> NEW
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> Slot width = 25 GHzSlot width = 37.5 GHz
>
> n = 4,m = 2n = 6,m = 3
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> END
>

Ramon> ok to change, but don't you mean

NEW

Slot width = 25 GHzSlot width = 37.5 GHz

n = 0,m = 2n = 7,m = 3



> OLD
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> *The '--' represents the nominal central frequency granularity
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> NEW
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> *The '--' represents the nominal central frequency granularity in 
> units of 6.25 GHz
>
> END
>
Ramon> changed as your suggestion (although I could even argue that it 
is not even necessary to explain '--' it can be seen as the frequency 
axis and by definition the separation between adjacent 'n' is 6.25 GHz....)

Thanks
Ramon