Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-trill-irb-13.txt

Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net> Fri, 08 July 2016 13:04 UTC

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Thanks.

On 06 Jul 2016, at 18:35, Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> wrote:

> Hi,
> 
> These are all fixed in version -14 except that the last comment re
> Section 7.1 to make the change "TENANT-LABEL -> TENANT-GWMAC-LABEL"
> still has a tiny glitch in it. In particular, there is an extra space
> just before "GWMAC" so it's "TENANT- GWMAC-LABEL". This certainly does
> not seem worth a new version and can be fixed by the RFC Editor.
> 
> Thanks,
> Donald
> ===============================
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> 
> On Wed, Jun 29, 2016 at 1:02 PM, Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net> wrote:
>> Francis, Donald, thank you for the review & updates.
>> 
>> Jari
>>