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Joel Halpern <jmh@joelhalpern.com> Thu, 04 January 2018 23:32 UTC

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Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review result: Ready

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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Document: draft-ietf-ospf-link-overload-11
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 2018-01-04
IETF LC End Date: 2018-01-16
IESG Telechat date: 2018-01-25

Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard

Major issues:
    N/A; my concerns from earlier versions have been addressed.

Minor issues:
    I understand the WG likes using the term "overload" for a link being taken
    out of service.  I think people will learn what we mean.  I do wish we had
    not chosen to misuse the words in this fashion.  This is much more a
    graceful-link-close indication (or clsoe-pending indication) than it is an
    overload indication.

Nits/editorial comments:

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