[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-mediactrl-6231-iana-00.txt

Alexey Melnikov <alexey.melnikov@isode.com> Wed, 07 March 2012 17:08 UTC

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I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
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Please resolve these comments along with any other comments you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-mediactrl-6231-iana-00.txt
Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov
Review Date: 2012-03-07	
IETF LC End Date: 2012-03-08
IESG Telechat date: 2012-03-15

Summary: The document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC

Major issues: none

Minor issues: none

Nits/editorial comments:


    | 433   | Unsupported   | the request contains  | RFC6231           |
    |       | collect and   | <collect> and         |                   |
    |       | record        | <record> elements and |                   |
    |       | capability    | the MS does support   |                   |

"does support" --> "does not support" ?

    |       |               | these operations      |                   |
    |       |               | simultaneously        |                   |