[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-pd-relay-requirements-04

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Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-pd-relay-requirements-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2020-12-12
IETF LC End Date: 2020-12-14
IESG Telechat date: 2020-12-17

Summary: The document is ready for publication with nits as a standard track RFC

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
1. first sentence in section  3.5 "If the client loses information about a
prefix that it is delegated ..." not clear "it is" 2. section 7 "This document
does not add any new security considerations beyond those mentioned in Section
22 of [RFC8213]." RFC8213 does not have section 22 , did you mean of RFC8415?

3.  In section 7 are there any security requirements for the operational
interface requirements from section 4.4?