[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-catalog-zones-08

[Russ Housley via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review result: Almost Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-catalog-zones-08
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review Date: 2022-12-03
IETF LC End Date: 2022-12-13
IESG Telechat date: unknown


Summary: Almost Ready


Major Concerns: None


Minor Concerns:

The document lacks an IANA Considerations section.  Please add one,
even if it says that there are no actions for IANA and asks the
RFC Editor to remove the section when the document is published.
Such a section provides clarity during IANA review of the document.

Section 3 says:

   Catalog consumers MUST ignore any RR in the catalog zone which is
   meaningless to or otherwise not supported by the implementation.

I am unsure what is meant by "meaningless".  Please define the term
or provide some explanation.


Nits:

Section 2 provides a list to definitions.  Please add some form of
punctuation after the word being defined (a colon or a hypen or
something else to aid the reader).


Note:
   
I did not review Appendix A or Appendix B.