Re: [Gen-art] [Ace] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ace-coap-est-15

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Tue, 17 December 2019 19:36 UTC

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David, thanks for your review. Panos, thanks for your response. I entered a No Objection ballot. There will not be further Gen-ART reviews.

Alissa


> On Oct 8, 2019, at 2:37 PM, Panos Kampanakis (pkampana) <pkampana@cisco.com> wrote:
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> Thanks David. Done. I replaced the RFC7525 references with BCP195. 
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> Should I upload or will there be more Gen-ART reviews?
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> Subject: [Ace] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ace-coap-est-15
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> Reviewer: David Schinazi
> Review result: Ready with Nits
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> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
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> Document: draft-ietf-ace-coap-est-??
> Reviewer: David Schinazi
> Review Date: 2019-10-05
> IETF LC End Date: 2019-10-18
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
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> Summary: Document is clear and well-written.
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> Major issues: None.
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> Minor issues: None.
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> Nits/editorial comments: I believe references to RFC7525 should instead refer to it as BCP195 to point to future revisions.
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