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Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> Mon, 24 November 2014 08:21 UTC

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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

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Document: draft-ietf-l3vpn-mvpn-mldp-nlri-07

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour

Review Date: 2014-11-24

IETF LC End Date: 2014-10-27

IESG Telechat date: 2014-11-25



Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some  comments .



Minor issue:

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page [Page 8]:

"

- Range 0x41-0x7f: mLDP Range.  Values are assigned from this range

       when the NLRI format associated with the route type presupposes

       that mLDP is the C-multicast control protocol.



"



Should it be should it be Range 0x43-0x7f ? since 0x40-0x42  is  Reserved.



Nits:

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Please see LC message as well: http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/gen-art/current/msg10805.html





Best Regards,

Meral

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