Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dots-signal-call-home-11

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Thu, 17 December 2020 02:16 UTC

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From: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
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David, thanks for your review. I entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa


> On Oct 30, 2020, at 7:30 PM, David Schinazi via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
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> Reviewer: David Schinazi
> Review result: Ready
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> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-dots-signal-call-home-11
> Reviewer: David Schinazi
> Review Date: 2020-10-30
> IETF LC End Date: 2020-11-12
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
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> Summary: Thanks for a clear document, I didn't see any issues from a GenART perspective.
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