Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-core-resource-directory-25

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Wed, 12 August 2020 17:01 UTC

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Thanks Russ. I pointed to your review in my No Objection ballot.
Alissa

> On Jul 27, 2020, at 2:52 PM, Russ Housley via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Russ Housley
> Review result: Almost Ready
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-core-resource-directory-25
> Reviewer: Russ Housley
> Review Date: 2020-07-27
> IETF LC End Date: 2020-03-31
> IESG Telechat date: 2020-08-13
> 
> I reviewed -24 on 2020-03-14.  The Major Concerns raised in that
> review have been resolved.  Some Minor Concerns were introduced as
> part of the changes.
> 
> Summary: Almost Ready
> 
> 
> Major Concerns:
> 
> None.
> 
> 
> Minor Concerns:
> 
> Section 7.1 says: "... can be transported in the subject."  I think
> you should say "subject field" or "subject name".  Do you mean to
> exclude the subject alternative name?
> 
> Section 7.1.1 says:
> 
>   Registrants that are prepared to pick a different identifier when
>   their initial attempt at registration is unauthorized should pick an
>   identifier at least twice as long as the expected number of
>   registrants; registrants without such a recovery options should pick
>   significantly longer endpoint names (e.g. using UUID URNs [RFC4122]).
> 
> I think that the reason for the  recommendation on length is to reduce
> the likelihood of name collision.  However, it is not clear to me why
> this is linked in any way to authorization failures on the first
> attempt to register.
> 
> 
> Nits:
> 
> Section 7.1: s/It is immaterial there whether/It is immaterial whether/
> 
> Section 8.1: s/address based access/address-based access/
> 
> IDnits reports:
> 
> == There are 3 instances of lines with non-ascii characters in the
>    document.
> 
> == There are 1 instance of lines with multicast IPv4 addresses in the
>    document.  If these are generic example addresses, they should be
>    changed to use the 233.252.0.x range defined in RFC 5771
> 
> == There are 3 instances of lines with non-RFC3849-compliant IPv6
>    addresses in the document.  If these are example addresses, they
>    should be changed.
> 
> 
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