[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-hardie-privsec-metadata-insertion
Stewart Bryant <stewart.bryant@gmail.com> Sat, 28 January 2017 10:20 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-hardie-privsec-metadata-insertion
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Document: draft-hardie-privsec-metadata-insertion-??
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2017-01-28
IETF LC End Date: 2017-02-21
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
Summary: This is a well written document with a couple of nits. It would
be helpful to the reader interested in the concept, but unfamiliar with
DNS if there was some minor additional clarification regarding EDNS0.
Major issues: None
Minor issues:
RFC4301 is an unused reference. Is it missing from the text?
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By negotiating an EDNS0
option which allowed them to self-populate this data,.....
SB> Calling up EDNS0 (which really needs expanding) comes out of the
SB> blue and could use a reference and sentence of explanation
SB> at least for those not familiar with the detail of DNS.
Nits/editorial comments:
[RFC7624] in the Abstract should be changed to RFC7624
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1. Introduction
....
exploited in the attacks document in [RFC7258] and the threats
s/document/documented/
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-hardie-privsec-… Stewart Bryant