[Gen-art] Combined Gen-art and secdir LC review: draft-ietf-manet-smc-sec-threats-05

Robert Sparks <rjsparks@nostrum.com> Mon, 08 August 2016 15:17 UTC

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Subject: [Gen-art] Combined Gen-art and secdir LC review: draft-ietf-manet-smc-sec-threats-05
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I am the assigned Gen-ART and secdir reviewer for this draft. The 
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Document: draft-ietf-manet-smf-sec-threats-05
Reviewer: Robert Sparks
Review Date: 8 Aug 2016
IETF LC End Date: 11 Aug 2016
IESG Telechat date: 18 Aug 2016

Summary: Ready for publication as an Informational RFC

This draft provides a discussion of vulnerabilities in Simplified Multicast
Forwarding (SMF), focusing on attacking the Duplicate Packet Detection and
Relay Set Selection mechanisms. It positions itself as being useful 
for those deploying SMF as currently defined.  It does not propose 
but does have a section that identifies potential future work that might.

I have sent several editorial nits directly to the authors.