[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-grow-wkc-behavior-03
Brian Carpenter via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Sat, 04 May 2019 04:52 UTC
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Reviewer: Brian Carpenter Review result: Ready with Issues Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-grow-wkc-behavior-03 I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-grow-wkc-behavior-03.txt Reviewer: Brian Carpenter Review Date: 2019-05-04 IETF LC End Date: 2019-05-13 IESG Telechat date: Summary: Ready, but... -------- Minor issues: ------------- This seems *much* more like a BCP than a standard. In both the Abstract and the 2nd paragraph of the Introduction, it might be helpful to add something like: This document recommends specific action items to limit future inconsistency.
- [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-g… Brian Carpenter via Datatracker
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Randy Bush
- Re: [Gen-art] [GROW] Genart last call review of d… David Farmer
- Re: [Gen-art] [GROW] Genart last call review of d… Randy Bush
- Re: [Gen-art] [GROW] Genart last call review of d… Brian E Carpenter
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Alissa Cooper