Re: [Gen-art] [GROW] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-grow-wkc-behavior-03

David Farmer <farmer@umn.edu> Sat, 04 May 2019 07:39 UTC

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From: David Farmer <farmer@umn.edu>
Date: Sat, 4 May 2019 02:38:48 -0500
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [GROW] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-grow-wkc-behavior-03
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On Fri, May 3, 2019 at 11:52 PM Brian Carpenter via Datatracker <
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> Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
> Review result: Ready with Issues
>
> Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-grow-wkc-behavior-03
>
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
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> Document: draft-ietf-grow-wkc-behavior-03.txt
> Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
> Review Date: 2019-05-04
> IETF LC End Date: 2019-05-13
> IESG Telechat date:
>
> Summary: Ready, but...
> --------
>
> Minor issues:
> -------------
>
> This seems *much* more like a BCP than a standard.
>

In my opinion, this document adds new requirements or at least new
considerations for implementations of RFC1997, I think that means it
updates RFC1997. I liked to see it have "Updates: 1997" metadata added and
appropriate statements in the Abstract and Intro. I think this requires and
justifies it being Standards Track.

In both the Abstract and the 2nd paragraph of the Introduction,
> it might be helpful to add something like:
>   This document recommends specific action items to limit future
> inconsistency.
>

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