Re: [Gen-art] [GROW] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-grow-wkc-behavior-03

[David Farmer <[e-mail]>]

On Fri, May 3, 2019 at 11:52 PM Brian Carpenter via Datatracker <
[e-mail]> wrote:

> Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
> Review result: Ready with Issues
>
> Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-grow-wkc-behavior-03
>
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> Document: draft-ietf-grow-wkc-behavior-03.txt
> Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
> Review Date: 2019-05-04
> IETF LC End Date: 2019-05-13
> IESG Telechat date:
>
> Summary: Ready, but...
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>
> Minor issues:
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> This seems *much* more like a BCP than a standard.
>

In my opinion, this document adds new requirements or at least new
considerations for implementations of RFC1997, I think that means it
updates RFC1997. I liked to see it have "Updates: 1997" metadata added and
appropriate statements in the Abstract and Intro. I think this requires and
justifies it being Standards Track.

In both the Abstract and the 2nd paragraph of the Introduction,
> it might be helpful to add something like:
>   This document recommends specific action items to limit future
> inconsistency.
>

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