Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-tls-sni-encryption-05

[Benjamin Kaduk <[e-mail]>]

Thanks for the review, Meral!

Authors, I'm going to go ahead and send this over to the IESG, but it will
end up (most likely) on the September 19th telechat, so you have over a
week to get a revision up with fixes.

-Ben

On Tue, Sep 03, 2019 at 05:56:20AM +0000, Meral Shirazipour wrote:
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
> 
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> Document: draft-ietf-tls-sni-encryption-05
> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
> Review Date: 2019-09-02
> IETF LC End Date: 2019-09-02
> IESG Telechat date: NA
> 
> 
> Summary: This draft is ready to be published as an Informational RFC.
> Major issues:
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> Minor issues:
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> Nits/editorial comments:
> Some may have already been reported…
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> -[Page 2], Section 1, "colocated"--->"collocated"
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> -[Page 3], Section 2, "mutiple"---->"multiple"
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> -[Page 3], Section 2.1, "fradulent"---->"fraudulent"
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> -[Page 4], Section 2.1, "MITM inspection", please spell out Man-In-The-Middle attack at first use
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> -[Page 7], Section 3.6, "is the the"---->"is the"
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> -[Page 10], Section 4.2, "ferver"---->"server"
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> 
> Best Regards,
> Meral
> ---
> Meral Shirazipour
> Ericsson
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