Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-isis-pcr-04

Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net> Thu, 07 January 2016 12:51 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-isis-pcr-04
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Thanks for the review, Suresh. I agree with your comment. Authors?

Jari

On 06 Jan 2016, at 06:32, Suresh Krishnan <suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com> wrote:

> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-isis-pcr-04.txt
> Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan
> Review Date: 2016-01-05
> Telechat Date: 2016-01-07
> 
> Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard but I
> have a minor comment that you might wish to address.
> 
> * Minor
> 
> There is no reference for the format of the Bandwidth fields in Sections 6.3
> and 6.4. I am assuming this refers to the Single Precision format (binary32)
> from IEEE 754. If so, please add an explicit reference to this.
> 
> Thanks
> Suresh
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