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Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pim-join-attributes-for-lisp-05

Dino Farinacci <farinacci@gmail.com> Thu, 01 December 2016 19:56 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pim-join-attributes-for-lisp-05
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> Could you make this sentence more readable?
> 
>   It determines the downstream destination for unicast head-end replication and identifies the
>   receiver ETR that needs to be notified should the root of the
>   distribution tree move to another site.
> 
> "should be", "moving”?

I do not understand what you are suggesting. Write more words please.

Dino

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