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Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> Fri, 22 December 2017 00:20 UTC

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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
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Document: draft-ietf-trill-p2mp-bfd-06
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2017-12-21
IETF LC End Date:  2018-01-08
IESG Telechat date: 2018-01-25

Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some comments.

Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 3], "It currently read:" and "Now it should read:" seem to have the exact same text. Is that the intent?
-[Page 4], Section 6, "tacking active tails"---->"tracking active tails"


Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson Research
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