[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-teas-rsvp-te-domain-subobjects-03

Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> Fri, 06 November 2015 22:25 UTC

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From: Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com>
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-teas-rsvp-te-domain-subobjects-03
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Document: draft-ietf-teas-rsvp-te-domain-subobjects-03.txt
Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review Date: 2015-11-07
IETF LC End Date: 2015-11-09
IESG Telechat date:

Summary: Ready with issues
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Comment:
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Needs to be approved along with draft-ietf-pce-pcep-domain-sequence.

Major Issues:
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> 3.2.1.  Autonomous system
>
>   [RFC3209] already defines 2-Byte AS number.
>
>   To support 4-Byte AS numbers as per [RFC6793], the following
>   subobject is defined:
>
>      0                   1                   2                   3
>      0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1
>     +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+
>     |L|    Type     |     Length    |         Reserved              |
>     +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+
>     |                          AS-ID (4 bytes)                      |
>     +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+

I don't understand why that is considered Experimental. It seems like
a major defect in RFC 3209 that needs to be fixed on the standards
track as soon as possible, independently of the present draft.

Minor Issues:
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It would be nice to see a suggested timescale for the experiment in section 1.1.
How many years before this document should be evaluated?