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Re: [Gen-art] draft-ietf-tls-record-limit-02.txt

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Tue, 03 April 2018 14:10 UTC

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From: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
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Date: Tue, 03 Apr 2018 10:09:54 -0400
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Francis, thanks for your review. Spencer also caught your nit in his ballot. I have entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa

> On Mar 16, 2018, at 4:43 AM, Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr> wrote:
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> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-tls-record-limit-02.txt
> Reviewer: Francis Dupont
> Review Date: 20180315
> IESG Telechat date: 20180320
> 
> Summary: Ready
> 
> Major issues: None
> 
> Minor issues: None
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> - 5 page 6 (wording): and -> a or the or nothing? in
>  "extension MUST ignore and "max_fragment_length" that"
>                         ^^^ a
> 
> Regards
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> Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr
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