Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-11

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Wed, 20 February 2019 14:58 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-11
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Joel, thanks for your reviews of this document. Authors, thanks for your responses. I entered a DISCUSS ballot based on one bit in Section 6.

Alissa

> On Feb 7, 2019, at 1:19 PM, Joel Halpern <jmh@joelhalpern.com>; wrote:
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> Reviewer: Joel Halpern
> Review result: Ready
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> Document: draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-11
> Reviewer: Joel Halpern
> Review Date: 2019-02-07
> IETF LC End Date: 2018-10-03
> IESG Telechat date: 2019-02-21
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> Summary: This Internet Draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard
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> Major issues: N/A
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> Minor issues: N/A
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> Nits/editorial comments:  N/A
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