[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-flex-algo-09

[Vijay Gurbani via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-flex-algo-??
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: 2022-08-12
IETF LC End Date: 2022-08-17
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: Draft is ready with nits for a Proposed Standard.

Major issues: 0

Minor issues: 1 (please see below)

Nits/editorial comments: 4 (please see below)

Minor:
- Sec. 3.6: Note that Type is "TBD" here.  Should this be 1046, as shown in
 Table 1?  (Or is the use of 1046 still under discussion?)

Nits:
- I note that certain acronyms --- IGP, NLRI, ASLA --- are not defined.  I
suspect that these are well-known in the community, hence need no definition. 
Just in case they are not, you may consider expanding the rare ones on first
use. - Sec. 1: s/Flexible algorithm is called so as/Flexible algorithm is so
called because/ - Sec. 2: s/Definition(s) (FAD) advertised by a node
is/Definition(s) (FAD) advertised by a node is (are)/
  Reason: symmetry in the sentence construction
- Sec. 3.6: Is Figure 7 missing the trailing "//" for sub-TLV tpes?

Thanks.