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Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> Fri, 16 October 2015 22:07 UTC

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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.
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Document: draft-ietf-6man-predictable-fragment-id-10
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2015-10-16
IETF LC End Date: 2015-09-09
IESG Telechat date: 2015-10-22

Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC.



Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
[Page 7], "that needs to fragmented"--->"that needs to be fragmented"



Best Regards,
Meral
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