Return-Path: X-Original-To: gen-art@ietfa.amsl.com Delivered-To: gen-art@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 981831B3421 for ; Fri, 16 Oct 2015 15:07:38 -0700 (PDT) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com X-Spam-Flag: NO X-Spam-Score: -4.2 X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-4.2 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_MED=-2.3, SPF_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=ham Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id GZmqClfl5-Oq for ; Fri, 16 Oct 2015 15:07:37 -0700 (PDT) Received: from usevmg21.ericsson.net (usevmg21.ericsson.net [198.24.6.65]) (using TLSv1 with cipher DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 053381A7002 for ; Fri, 16 Oct 2015 15:07:36 -0700 (PDT) X-AuditID: c6180641-f792c6d00000686a-82-562108ac1739 Received: from EUSAAHC003.ericsson.se (Unknown_Domain [147.117.188.81]) by usevmg21.ericsson.net (Symantec Mail Security) with SMTP id DC.B3.26730.CA801265; Fri, 16 Oct 2015 16:24:45 +0200 (CEST) Received: from EUSAAMB107.ericsson.se ([147.117.188.124]) by EUSAAHC003.ericsson.se ([147.117.188.81]) with mapi id 14.03.0248.002; Fri, 16 Oct 2015 18:07:35 -0400 From: Meral Shirazipour To: "draft-ietf-6man-predictable-fragment-id.all@tools.ietf.org" , "gen-art@ietf.org" Thread-Topic: Gen-ART Telechat Call review of draft-ietf-6man-predictable-fragment-id-10 Thread-Index: AdEIXv+SffNizwLkShiZEw6I0r2WdA== Date: Fri, 16 Oct 2015 22:07:34 +0000 Message-ID: Accept-Language: en-US Content-Language: en-US X-MS-Has-Attach: X-MS-TNEF-Correlator: x-originating-ip: [147.117.188.9] Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="_000_ABCAA4EF18F17B4FB619EA93DEF7939A45439F6Feusaamb107erics_" MIME-Version: 1.0 X-Brightmail-Tracker: H4sIAAAAAAAAA+NgFrrKLMWRmVeSWpSXmKPExsUyuXRPoO5aDsUwg09PhCzurvvDaHH11WcW ByaPJUt+Mnl8ufyZLYApissmJTUnsyy1SN8ugSvjxsVNzAVH1SvenMltYOxS7mLk5JAQMJGY /7eFDcIWk7hwbz2QzcUhJHCUUeLi20vMEM5yRolLZ56DVbEJWEhs//2cFSQhIrCCUeLqm5VM IAlhgVCJ40u+MIPYIgJREk+nLmWCsPUkHj5cD2azCKhKbF/9gxHE5hXwlbj3/wcriM0ItPr7 qTVgNcwC4hK3nsxngjhJQGLJnvPMELaoxMvH/1ghbEWJff3T2SHq8yW2TpzJCjFTUOLkzCcs ExiFZiEZNQtJ2SwkZRBxHYkFuz+xQdjaEssWvmaGsc8ceMyELL6AkX0VI0dpcWpZbrqR4SZG YDwck2Bz3MG44JPlIUYBDkYlHt4FL+XDhFgTy4orcw8xSnOwKInzzptxP1RIID2xJDU7NbUg tSi+qDQntfgQIxMHp1QDY7wm14Kbe9aL5jObdJcWrrh1RKTMW+VvwQb342U7EwM13tT/cLGZ c8L49paO7p7inplBBim3pni3Gfqu0wiv99ffr5xVo23yVrEyl2+C7iHV6O/Ot3qZXAQXqVVf Wy+/ocVAUHPf7EtzAr2i0m99fq6+yP5D7jYh5R+tJRv7VO4Jix4q2TRJiaU4I9FQi7moOBEA vWHEqGgCAAA= Archived-At: Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Call review of draft-ietf-6man-predictable-fragment-id-10 X-BeenThere: gen-art@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15 Precedence: list List-Id: "GEN-ART: General Area Review Team" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 16 Oct 2015 22:07:38 -0000 --_000_ABCAA4EF18F17B4FB619EA93DEF7939A45439F6Feusaamb107erics_ Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review = Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for t= he IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting = a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at . Document: draft-ietf-6man-predictable-fragment-id-10 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2015-10-16 IETF LC End Date: 2015-09-09 IESG Telechat date: 2015-10-22 Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: [Page 7], "that needs to fragmented"--->"that needs to be fragmented" Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com --_000_ABCAA4EF18F17B4FB619EA93DEF7939A45439F6Feusaamb107erics_ Content-Type: text/html; charset="us-ascii" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. T= he General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being proc= essed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.

Please wait for direction from your document shepher= d or AD before posting a new version of the draft.

 

For more information, please see the FAQ at

 

<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/Ge= nArtfaq>.

 

Document: draft-ietf-6man-predictable-fragment-id-10=

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour

Review Date: 2015-10-16

IETF LC End Date: 2015-09-09

IESG Telechat date: 2015-10-22

 

Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Info= rmational RFC.

 

 

 

Major issues:

 

Minor issues:

 

Nits/editorial comments:

[Page 7], "that needs to fragmented"--->= ;"that needs to be fragmented"

 

 

 

Best Regards,

Meral

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Meral Shirazipour

Ericsson

Research

www.ericsson.com

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