Return-Path: X-Original-To: gen-art@ietfa.amsl.com Delivered-To: gen-art@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id B12601A7113 for ; Tue, 26 May 2015 04:20:56 -0700 (PDT) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com X-Spam-Flag: NO X-Spam-Score: -1.91 X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-1.91 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, T_RP_MATCHES_RCVD=-0.01] autolearn=ham Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id zQLxtrUqi8FQ for ; Tue, 26 May 2015 04:20:54 -0700 (PDT) Received: from p130.piuha.net (p130.piuha.net [193.234.218.130]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 33B961A7D80 for ; Tue, 26 May 2015 04:20:54 -0700 (PDT) Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by p130.piuha.net (Postfix) with ESMTP id 871BE2CC9C; Tue, 26 May 2015 14:20:53 +0300 (EEST) (envelope-from jari.arkko@piuha.net) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at piuha.net Received: from p130.piuha.net ([127.0.0.1]) by localhost (p130.piuha.net [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id 29Kpf5bp65yn; Tue, 26 May 2015 14:20:52 +0300 (EEST) Received: from [127.0.0.1] (p130.piuha.net [IPv6:2a00:1d50:2::130]) by p130.piuha.net (Postfix) with ESMTP id 04E292CC49; Tue, 26 May 2015 14:20:52 +0300 (EEST) (envelope-from jari.arkko@piuha.net) Content-Type: multipart/signed; boundary="Apple-Mail=_EE4F0A6E-0084-4E35-BDAE-B1978CE30695"; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; micalg=pgp-sha512 Mime-Version: 1.0 (Mac OS X Mail 7.3 \(1878.6\)) From: Jari Arkko In-Reply-To: <201503222049.t2MKnG5B078518@givry.fdupont.fr> Date: Tue, 26 May 2015 14:20:52 +0300 Message-Id: References: <201503222049.t2MKnG5B078518@givry.fdupont.fr> To: Francis Dupont X-Mailer: Apple Mail (2.1878.6) Archived-At: Cc: gen-art@ietf.org, draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-signaling.all@tools.ietf.org Subject: Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-signaling-09.txt X-BeenThere: gen-art@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15 Precedence: list List-Id: "GEN-ART: General Area Review Team" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 26 May 2015 11:20:56 -0000 --Apple-Mail=_EE4F0A6E-0084-4E35-BDAE-B1978CE30695 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Thank you very much for your review, Francis. Jari On 22 Mar 2015, at 22:49, Francis Dupont wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Please wait for direction from your document shepherd > or AD before posting a new version of the draft. > > Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-signaling-09.txt > Reviewer: Francis Dupont > Review Date: 20150313 > IETF LC End Date: 20150318 > IESG Telechat date: unknown > > Summary: Ready > > Major issues: None > > Minor issues: None > > Nits/editorial comments: > I read the 09 version but was too busy to prepare the IETF meeting > to send these few comments. Note I know the 10 version is available > so I adjusted by comments (i.e., I don't raise concerns about removed > or improved texts :-). > > - 2 page 4 (end node): e.g. -> e.g., > > (it seems the very few other comments no longer apply! :-) > > Thanks > > Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art --Apple-Mail=_EE4F0A6E-0084-4E35-BDAE-B1978CE30695 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Content-Disposition: attachment; filename=signature.asc Content-Type: application/pgp-signature; name=signature.asc Content-Description: Message signed with OpenPGP using GPGMail -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Comment: GPGTools - https://gpgtools.org iQIcBAEBCgAGBQJVZFcUAAoJEM80gCTQU46q2pIP/2puXR/r4xkuD3ht4j6+sr2W Oyqa+eQN2il0U5VR60eKij2boPDUecXbhL0h/W2RXG0ITs6t+l25LPVYwpnJ1Orb tyTFobyvSonyWihVgM1WSw16i46UstIlmSdljUaZH60A2XzfqDB1FJz8Bg6sAccP hcz/82oqNXmKrwo9WXF/tQlMU8vThNpn2uCa9JZLvJu3ThmDaqMnAmeFMNr116gY IUEgNdvsNm8/veZwyPZzk24CAOBTnT8SZrpe+p+OgqS3HzWEG7YPiYe1oktnn44Q CWf+fsJECaZoYmHyM0aHajEj7FMQUjxNuF3emN2mcMVgETj0XlgBEKIwNnIB6gqt vdFHOF9ADkr+md7j3iI0EYeNNYdHA0MT9bdQw+doMvTw5qaGhm5S11va4H7Sc5CF ogTTIKIJymXyczNdWI4Z4GQ8+sb2HsreEdjNqr4Ub7rrHZ6tjcmr215tPbhBiNBT iOiT5+gInCXpxu/n/z8m1bQCv43WteHjoUj1uvKKVDMeG4pTtFenRmInNAD7sxzl hB+/YDAICeOkLIDN4B+s2UptA7c5biIdlaUYOQKTMfJE/4v8BVpaeQhZPBLaXeft Cd5BzqHx9kqVKdEmmKTnJmowZ4MuVrugVpJfSCBTQjgVe+scOvb82+EfJbGT3iZA TeV7Lz5QV/RB8ccVK6gI =YJS5 -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --Apple-Mail=_EE4F0A6E-0084-4E35-BDAE-B1978CE30695--