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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of 04 draft-ietf-appsawg-http-problem-01

Erik Wilde <erik.wilde@dret.net> Thu, 17 December 2015 17:03 UTC

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To: Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net>, "Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" <dromasca@avaya.com>
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hello jari.

On 2015-12-17 5:02 , Jari Arkko wrote:
> Thanks for the review, Dan! Erik, is there anything in the clarification that would be beneficial for future readers? (Just asking, not suggesting.)

to me, this existing text is clear enough (and it seemed like dan was 
happy with my clarification):

"... (so that it can be serialized in formats other than JSON) ..."

but if anybody thinks that this needs more explaining, we could 
certainly do that. my suggestion is to keep it like it is, but if there 
is a -03, then we can tweak the language a little.

thanks and cheers,

dret.

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