[Gen-art] Re: [Idr] draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-inter-as-topology-ext-35 ietf last call Genart review

[Ron Even <[e-mail]>]

Hi Aijun,
Thanks, I have no other comments
Roni




On Fri, 3 Jul 2026 at 9:49 Aijun Wang <[e-mail]> wrote:

> Hi, Roni:
>
> Thanks for your review.
> I have updated the draft and will be updated later, together with other
> comment.
>
> Please see the detail replies inline below.
>
> Aijun
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> Subject: [Idr] draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-inter-as-topology-ext-35 ietf last
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> Document: draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-inter-as-topology-ext
> Title: BGP-LS Extension for Inter-AS Topology Retrieval
> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review result: Ready with Nits
>
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> Document: draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-inter-as-topology-ext-??9
> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review Date: 2026-07-01
> IETF LC End Date: 2026-07-07
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
>
> Summary:
> The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC with minor
> nits
> [WAJ] Thanks！
>
>
> Major issues:
>
> Minor issues:
>
> Nits/editorial comments:
>
> In section 5 second paragraph  seesection 11) should be see (section 11)
> [WAJ] Have updated.
>
> In section 4 second paragraph the use of the word “among” probably mean
> inside or internal
> [WAJ] There are two "among" in this section. I replace the first 'among'
> with 'within', and second 'among' with 'between', to describe the
> IGP-internal information and IGP-between information respectively.
>
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