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Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] [dmarc-ietf] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmarc-psd-08

Scott Kitterman <scott@kitterman.com> Thu, 16 April 2020 03:43 UTC

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On April 16, 2020 3:30:59 AM UTC, Seth Blank <seth@sethblank.com> wrote:
>On Wed, Apr 15, 2020 at 7:45 PM Scott Kitterman <scott@kitterman.com>
>wrote:
>
>> > I think you are very close to an Abstract/Introduction that is
>clearly
>> > comprehensible to people who are not familiar with DMARC.
>>
>> Considering this is an extension to DMARC, I don't think that's the
>target
>> audience.
>>
>
>As an individual: everyone who reads the document stand-alone gets
>confused
>by this lack of clarity (it's the common thread through all the last
>call
>reviews so far), and a concise summary up top feels valuable both for
>this
>evaluation process, and for any future consumers of the document.
>Whether
>someone's familiar with DMARC or not, if they're reading this document,
>what's the harm in spelling it out very clearly, especially if we have
>text
>that we believe accomplishes this?

Perhaps I'm too pessimistic, but I don't think it's possible to actually make this clear to anyone that isn't familiar with RFC 7489 without essentially turning this into a proto 7489bis.

If you want to add it and are confident we aren't diving into a deep, deep hole, I don't strongly object.  Just let me know what to add.

Scott K

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