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Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> Mon, 22 December 2014 23:40 UTC

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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
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<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-dnssd-requirements-04
Reviewer: Ben Campbell
Review Date: 2014-12-22
IETF LC End Date: 2015-01-07
IESG Telechat date: (if known)

Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as an informational RFC. Its well written and easy to understand.

Major issues:

None

Minor issues:

The acronym is a bit unfortunate. I suspect that much of the target audience already knows SSD as "solid-state drive" Of course, I don't really expect you to change it at this point in the process. :-)

Nits/editorial comments:

-- IDNits reports a couple of out-of-date references.

-- REQ2:

Am I correct in assuming that this would not apply to case C when used in zero configuration mode?

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