Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-housley-id-sig-update-02.txt
Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com> Wed, 03 January 2018 15:30 UTC
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From: Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-housley-id-sig-update-02.txt
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Thanks for the review. Russ > On Jan 2, 2018, at 5:26 PM, Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr> wrote: > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-housley-id-sig-update-02.txt > Reviewer: Francis Dupont > Review Date: 20171221 > IETF LC End Date: 20180102 > IESG Telechat date: unknown > > Summary: Ready > > Major issues: None > > Minor issues: None > > Nits/editorial comments: > - ToC page 2 and 10 page 8: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments > > - 1.1 page 3: I suggest to update RFC 2119 by RFC 8179 > > Note both comments can be addressed by the RFC Editor. > > Happy New Year! > > Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr
- [Gen-art] review of draft-housley-id-sig-update-0… Francis Dupont
- Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-housley-id-sig-upda… Russ Housley