Re: [Gen-art] Resolution on comments of draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-pe-etree-10

[Jiangyuanlong <[e-mail]>]

Sheng,

Thanks much for your confirmation.

Cheers,
Yuanlong

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Sheng Jiang
> Sent: Tuesday, December 15, 2015 9:57 AM
> To: Jiangyuanlong; Russ Housley; Stephen Farrell; Jari Arkko; Ben Campbell; Barry
> Leiba; Alvaro Retana (aretana); Stewart Bryant
> Cc: [e-mail]; IETF Gen-ART; The IESG;
> BRUNGARD, DEBORAH A
> Subject: RE: Resolution on comments of draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-pe-etree-10
> 
> Hi, I can confirm this version addresses my OPS DIR review comments.
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Sheng
> 
> >-----Original Message-----
> >From: Jiangyuanlong
> >Sent: Friday, December 11, 2015 7:17 PM
> >To: Russ Housley; Stephen Farrell; Jari Arkko; Sheng Jiang; Ben Campbell; Barry
> >Leiba; Alvaro Retana (aretana); Stewart Bryant
> >Cc: [e-mail]; IETF Gen-ART; The IESG;
> >BRUNGARD, DEBORAH A
> >Subject: Resolution on comments of draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-pe-etree-10
> >
> >Hi all,
> >
> >Thanks a lot for your reviews.
> >Based on all the comments received during the IESG evaluation, we have
> >prepared a tentative version 11 for this draft.
> >We believe all the comments are resolved, but please check whether you have
> >any concerns with the texts in this version.
> >
> >If there are no further comments, we will upload it as the formal revision 11
> >version.
> >
> >Best regards,
> >Yuanlong
> >
> >> -----Original Message-----
> >> From: BRUNGARD, DEBORAH A [mailto:[e-mail]]
> >> Sent: Thursday, December 03, 2015 11:03 PM
> >> To: Jari Arkko
> >> Cc: Jiangyuanlong; Russ Housley; [e-mail];
> >IETF
> >> Gen-ART; IETF
> >> Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-pe-etree-10
> >>
> >> Hi Jari,
> >>
> >> Yes, we'll be doing a new revision for addressing other comments.
> >>
> >> I've asked for today's telechat if no discusses to mark it as approved, revised
> >> draft needed.
> >>
> >> Much thanks Russ for your review!
> >>
> >> Deborah
> >>
> >>
> >> Sent from my iPhone
> >>
> >> > On Dec 3, 2015, at 1:08 PM, Jari Arkko <[e-mail]> wrote:
> >> >
> >> > Many thanks for your detailed review, Russ!
> >> >
> >> > Yuanlong, will there be a new draft version or other edits before the draft
> >> > is approved?
> >> >
> >> > Jari
> >> >
> >> >> On 17 Nov 2015, at 00:53, Jiangyuanlong <[e-mail]>
> >> wrote:
> >> >>
> >> >> Russ,
> >> >>
> >> >> Thanks a lot for your review and good observations.
> >> >> Please see my comments in line.
> >> >>
> >> >> Best regards,
> >> >> Yuanlong
> >> >>
> >> >>> -----Original Message-----
> >> >>> From: Russ Housley [mailto:[e-mail]]
> >> >>> Sent: Saturday, November 14, 2015 1:28 AM
> >> >>> To: [e-mail]
> >> >>> Cc: IETF Gen-ART; IETF
> >> >>> Subject: Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-pe-etree-10
> >> >>>
> >> >>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> >Review
> >> >>> Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the
> >IESG for
> >> >>> the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd
> >or AD
> >> >>> before posting a new version of the draft.
> >> >>>
> >> >>> For more information, please see the FAQ at
> >> >>> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
> >> >>>
> >> >>> Document: draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-pe-etree-10
> >> >>> Reviewer: Russ Housley
> >> >>> Review Date: 2015-11-13
> >> >>> IETF LC End Date: 2015-11-24
> >> >>> IESG Telechat date: unknown
> >> >>>
> >> >>> Summary:  Almost Ready
> >> >>>
> >> >>>
> >> >>> Major Concerns: None
> >> >>>
> >> >>>
> >> >>> Minor Concerns:
> >> >>>
> >> >>> Sections 4.1 and 5.3.1 inclues a reference to [802.1Q-2011].  Should
> >this be
> >> >>> the 2014 version of the document?  If not, please add the informative
> >> >>> reference for [802.1Q-2011].
> >> >> [YJ] Yes, all these should refer to [802.1Q-2014].
> >> >>
> >> >>>
> >> >>> Other Editorial Comments:
> >> >>>
> >> >>> The Abstract should appear on the title page.
> >> >> [YJ] OK.
> >> >>
> >> >>> Section 3 needs a reference for MEF 6.1:
> >> >>> s/Specification MEF 6.1/Specification MEF 6.1 [MEF6.1]/ Also, [MEF6.1]
> >> >>> needs to be added as a normative reference.
> >> >> [YJ] All these will be updated to MEF 6.2.
> >> >>
> >> >>> Section 3 needs a reference for IEEE 802.1Q-2003:
> >> >>> s/B.1.3 of IEEE 802.1Q-2003/B.1.3 of IEEE 802.1Q-2003 [802.1Q-2003]/
> >Also,
> >> >>> please add an informative reference for [802.1Q-2003].
> >> >> [YJ] Yes, we will add an informative reference for [802.1Q-2003].
> >> >>
> >> >>> Third level section headings do not have space between the section
> >number
> >> >>> and the section title.  For example:
> >> >>> s/5.3.1.PW Processing/5.3.1. PW Processing/
> >> >> [YJ] OK.
> >> >>
> >> >>> In Fig 4, there is room to shift the figure to the right, this will allow the
> >"AC"
> >> >>> labels to fit better on the left:
> >> >>>
> >> >>>             +----------------------------------------+
> >> >>>             |           VPLS-capable PE model        |
> >> >>>             |   +---------------+          +------+  |
> >> >>>             |   |               |==========|TVSI-1|------------
> >> >>>  +---+  AC  |   |               ------------      |------------ PWs
> >> >>>  |CE |----------|     Bridge    ------------      |------------
> >> >>>  +---+      |   |               | Root &   +------+  |
> >> >>>             |   |     Module    | Leaf VLAN   o      |
> >> >>>             |   |               |             o      |
> >> >>>             |   |               |             o      |
> >> >>>             |   |               |             o      |
> >> >>>             |   |               |             o      |
> >> >>>  +---+  AC  |   |               |   VLAN-n +------+  |
> >> >>>  |CE |----------|               ------------VSI-n |-------------
> >> >>>  +---+      |   |               |==========|
> >|------------- PWs
> >> >>>             |   |               |     ^    |
> >|-------------
> >> >>>             |   +---------------+     |    +------+  |
> >> >>>             |                         |              |
> >> >>>             +-------------------------|--------------+
> >> >>>                           LAN emulation Interface
> >> >>>
> >> >>>         Figure 4  A VPLS PE Model for E-Tree with a Single T-VSI
> >> >>
> >> >>
> >> >> [YJ] OK.
> >> >>
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