[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-lisp-eid-block-11

Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> Tue, 12 May 2015 02:11 UTC

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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-lisp-eid-block-11
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-lisp-eid-block-11
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2015-05-11
IETF LC End Date:  2015-04-28 on version -10 (this is a post deadline LC review/apologies)
IESG Telechat date: NA


Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC but I have some comments .


Nits/editorial comments:
- Not sure if the draft should be listed as Informational. Please verify.
- [Page 4], Section3, "of an LISP"--->"of a LISP"


Best Regards,
Meral
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