[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-regext-rdap-partial-response-12

David Schinazi via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Fri, 24 July 2020 22:47 UTC

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Reviewer: David Schinazi
Review result: Ready with Issues

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Document: draft-ietf-regext-rdap-partial-response-12
Reviewer: David Schinazi
Review Date: 2020-07-24
IETF LC End Date: 2020-08-14
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: Document is clear, well-written, and short. Thank you!

Major issues: None

Minor issues: After reading the document, I was somewhat
confused as to the definition of fieldSet query parameter.
I think adding a few sentences to Section 2 explaining that
a field set is a string that the server generates which maps 
to a set of fields only known to the server would help.
Additionally, specifying that the string can't be empty and
which characters are allowed might help avoid interop
issues down the road.

Nits/editorial comments: None