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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-rand-access-live-03

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Thu, 11 October 2018 13:34 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-rand-access-live-03
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Meral, thanks for the review. I have entered a DISCUSS ballot on a process point and pointed the authors to your review.

Alissa

> On Oct 9, 2018, at 1:32 AM, Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> wrote:
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft.
>  
> For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>>.
>  
> Document: draft-ietf-httpbis-rand-access-live-03
> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
> Review Date: 2018-10-08
> IETF LC End Date: NA
> IESG Telechat date: 2018-10-12
>  
> Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Experimental Track RFC .
>  
> Major issues:
> Minor issues:
> Nits/editorial comments:
> -[Page 5], "accessable"--->"accessible"
> -[Page 5], "providing a"---->"providing an"
>  
> Best Regards,
> Meral
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> Meral Shirazipour
> Ericsson Research
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