Re: [Gen-art] Genart review of draft-shafranovich-mime-sql-03

Yakov Shafranovich <yakov@shaftek.org> Tue, 19 February 2013 12:18 UTC

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Thanks

On Tuesday, February 19, 2013, Christer Holmberg <
christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> wrote:
> Hi,
>
> I have reviewed the -04 version. My comments on -03 have been addressed,
and the document is ready for publication.
>
> Regards,
>
> Christer
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: gen-art-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:gen-art-bounces@ietf.org] On
Behalf Of Christer Holmberg
> Sent: 5. helmikuuta 2013 2:55
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> Cc: draft-shafranovich-mime-sql.all@tools.ietf.org
> Subject: [Gen-art] Genart review of draft-shafranovich-mime-sql-03
>
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <
http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>
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> Document:                    draft-shafranovich-mime-sql-03.txt
>
> Reviewer:                     Christer Holmberg
>
> Review Date:                 5 Feb 2013
>
> IETF LC End Date:        20 Feb 2013
>
> IETF Telechat Date:       21 Feb 2013
>
> Summary:  The draft is well written, with a couple of minor editorial
comments (see below), and is ready for publication.
>
> Major Issues: None
>
> Minor Issues: None
>
> Editorial nits: None
>
> Q_ED_1: In section 2, I suggest to remove "which will be submitted to
IANA after approval of this document.".
>
> Q_ED_2: In section 3, I suggest to remove "After approval,".
>
> Best regards,
>
> Christer
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