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Re: [Gen-art] LC review of draft-ietf-rmcat-cc-requirements-05.txt

Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@ericsson.com> Tue, 25 November 2014 15:50 UTC

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From: Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@ericsson.com>
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Thanks for the review. (Were the comments adopted by the authors? This review is from August, but I cannot see a response…)

Jari

On 03 Aug 2014, at 21:37, Alexey Melnikov <alexey.melnikov@isode.com> wrote:

> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
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> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
> 
> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
> you may receive.
> 
> Document: draft-ietf-rmcat-cc-requirements-05
> Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov
> Review Date: 3-Aug-2014
> IETF LC End Date: 13-Aug-2014
> IESG Telechat date: N/A
> 
> Summary: This document is ready for publication as an Informational RFC [ready with comments]
> 
> Major issues: None
> Minor issues:
> 
> In Section 1: RMCAT is not explained/expanded, when mentioned for the first time. Does this acronym need to be in the published RFC, e.g. would it be useful for readers reading this document 10 years later?
> 
> RTP and RTCP need references.
> 
> In general, I found this document not to be very friendly to people who don't follow RMCAT.
> 
> Nits/editorial comments: None
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