[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-ospf-segment-routing-extensions-22

Dan Romascanu <dromasca@gmail.com> Tue, 05 December 2017 16:41 UTC

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Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-ospf-segment-routing-extensions-22
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
Review Date: 2017-12-05
IETF LC End Date: 2017-10-13
IESG Telechat date: 2017-12-14

Summary: Ready

A useful and well-written document. It requires previous reading and
understanding of OSPF, SPRING and other routing work. It is Ready for
publication. My initial review included a few minor requests for
clarifications. Most of these were addressed with text changes or additions.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments: