[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-regext-bundling-registration-11

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Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review result: Almost Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-regext-bundling-registration-11
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 2019-10-10
IETF LC End Date: None
IESG Telechat date: 2019-10-17

Summary: This document is almost ready for publication as an RFC.

I have received no response to my earlier review.  Some of the items have been
addressed, but not all of them.

Major issues:
    This document clearly defines normative protocol behavior.  As such, it
    would seem to either be Experimental or Proposed Standard, but not
    Informational.

Minor issues:
    The document incorporates items from a name space
    "urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:epp:b-dn", referred to with the prefix "b-dn:". 
    The only explanation of this meaning is in the terminology section.  
    However, the description does not indicate what document defines this
    information.

Nits/editorial comments:
    I note and appreciate that my comments on the SHOULD usage in section 7.2
    has been addressed.