[Gen-art] Gen-ART last call review of draft-ietf-dhc-vpn-option-14

"Roni Even" <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> Sun, 01 January 2012 14:24 UTC

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From: "Roni Even" <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com>
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART last call review of draft-ietf-dhc-vpn-option-14
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you
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Document: draft-ietf-dhc-vpn-option-14

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date: 2012-1-1

IETF LC End Date: 2012-1-4

IESG Telechat date:  2012-1-5


Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard  RFC.  


Major issues:



Minor issues:



Nits/editorial comments:  


1.       In section 3.2 "Type and VSS Information -- see Section 35" should
be 3.5

2.       In section 3.3 "This sub-option only only" 

3.       In 3.5 last bullet not clear - "and the length of the MUST be 1."