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Mahesh Jethanandani <mjethanandani@gmail.com> Thu, 07 June 2018 16:21 UTC

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From: Mahesh Jethanandani <mjethanandani@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-mahesh-etsi-urn-01
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Hi Stewart,

I have fixed all the typos, and found two more that I have fixed also. Sorry. Should have run the spellchecker.

URL:            https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-mahesh-etsi-urn-02.txt <https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-mahesh-etsi-urn-02.txt>
Status:         https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-mahesh-etsi-urn/ <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-mahesh-etsi-urn/>
Htmlized:       https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-mahesh-etsi-urn-02 <https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-mahesh-etsi-urn-02>
Htmlized:       https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-mahesh-etsi-urn <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-mahesh-etsi-urn>
Diff:           https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-mahesh-etsi-urn-02 <https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-mahesh-etsi-urn-02>

> On Jun 7, 2018, at 3:58 AM, Stewart Bryant <stewart.bryant@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
> Review result: Ready
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your
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> 
> Document: draft-mahesh-etsi-urn-01
> Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
> Review Date: 2018-06-07
> IETF LC End Date: None
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary: A simple text ready for publication. A few minor spelling mistakes.
> 
> Major issues: None
> 
> Minor issues: None
> 
> Nits/editorial comments: My spell checker picked up the following:
> 
> ========
>   Communication Technologies including fixed, mobile, radio, broadcast,
>   internet, aeornautical and other areas.
> 
> SB> s/aeornautical/aeronautical/
> ========
> 
>      +---------+--------------------------------------------------+
>      | ETSI    | European Telecommunications Standards Instititue |
> SB> s/Instititue/Institute/ 
> ========
> 
>         Name: European Telecommuncations Standards Institute (ETSI)
> SB>s/Telecommuncations/Telecommunications/ 
> ========
> 
> 

Mahesh Jethanandani
mjethanandani@gmail.com

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