Re: [Gen-art] [manet] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-lid-extension-05

[Alissa Cooper <[e-mail]>]

Stewart, thanks for your review. Rick, thanks for agreeing to make the changes. I enetered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa


> On Aug 6, 2019, at 5:50 AM, Rick Taylor <[e-mail]> wrote:
> 
> Hi Stewart,
> 
> Thanks for the prompt review.  We will wait for a few more reviews and publish a fixed document.
> 
> Many thanks,
> 
> Rick
> 
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>> Subject: [manet] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-lid-
>> extension-05
>> 
>> Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
>> Review result: Ready with Nits
>> 
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>> Document: draft-ietf-manet-dlep-lid-extension-05
>> Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
>> Review Date: 2019-08-06
>> IETF LC End Date: 2019-08-15
>> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
>> 
>> Summary: A well written document with a few nits that should be looked at.
>> 
>> Major issues: None
>> 
>> Minor issues: None
>> 
>> Nits/editorial comments:
>> 
>> " The Dynamic Link Exchange Protocol (DLEP) [RFC8175] describes a"
>> 
>> Nits says that the "[]" brackets should be removed
>> 
>> ==========
>> 
>>  " None of the features introduced by this extension require extra
>>   consideration by an implementation."
>> 
>> I think that should be
>> 
>>   "None of the features introduced by this extension require extra
>>   security consideration by an implementation."
>> 
>> ==============
>> 
>> "Assign a new DLEP Extensions Registry value (TBD1) from the"
>> 
>> I think that should be
>> 
>> "Assign a new DLEP Extensions Type Values Registry value (TBD1) from the"
>> 
>> ==============
>> 
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